Logo for Freestyle Gym

[mrb-solutions]

Hi Can anyone help, i am after some ideas to help with the design of a logo. Below is what we have so far but all are not quite right. The 'Limitless' is supposed to be like a heart beat monitor line. Perhaps it should be green also?

 

 

 

If it helps i prefer the second and 4th ones on the left going down as i think the 'freestyle' should be easier to read?

Edited June 26, 2012 by mrb-solutions

[teejay]

I would put a bit of space between the heartbeats and Limitless as it makes Limitless very difficult to read.

[sonofsanta]

Maybe have a complete heartbeat line in darker red, only just visible against the background, behind the limitless? May get the impression across in a stronger fashion. The only other alternative I can think of is customising the typeface somewhat - maybe making the middle L more a exaggerated spike in the manner of a heartbeat monitor, and scale up the outside spikes accordingly. In fact, size the outer two up anyway - it'd be a quicker change to make and may be sufficient.

 

I'd say avoid the graffiti fonts as they just look like they're trying too hard. Go for the sans-serif fonts like #4, maybe try some variations on that; a decent sans-serif will look authoritative, modern and efficient. Helvetica is a bit cliché, mind.

 

(also be careful of licensing on any fonts you use if this is for commercial use)

[mrb-solutions]

Thanks for the help, would anyone be able to have a go themselves and maybe @SYSMAN_MK could help?

[mrb-solutions]

Happy with that. Thanks sysman_mk monies sent just now.