Proof Reading

  1. jdoyle
    jdoyle
    my local ice hockey club produces a very nice email newsletter but takes a tumble with the proof reading

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    Welcome to the 11th of the Swindon Wildcats 2010/2011 Ice Hockey season E newsletters.

    What an amazing game at the Link Centre we experianced with the boys giving there all to beat the previously undefeated Manchester Phoenix

    If your not already a Season ticket holder see below details of our new six game package offer with great discounts which are now on sale.

    Kidzone launches this week to so were sure to have another packed house on Saturday.

    Ice Hockey in Swindon

    Your part of It!
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