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    Website Look Over

    Morning Website Gurus.

    Im a noob to web development but so far Im catching on very fast. Im creating my very own website, Xternal IT - External IT Support Throughout the West Midlands. Its not finished cos time is limited. Can someone have a look and tell me if its crap or it look ok-ish?

    Regards

    PS: validator.w3.org found alot of errors, but Ill sort that later lol.

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    Honestly? There isn't much to see. A homepage with multiple code errors and dead links.
    Design wise it is ok-ish.

    Perhaps post back when complete so we can give a better critique.... if Mods allow it, as I would have thought this is technically unauthorised advertising.

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    Thanks for looking. I'll add more stuffs to the homepage. By the way, I'm not advertising, I hope the mods could see it that way.

    Thanks again for looking. I'll get to wrk now.

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    You've tagged this thread PHP, does that mean you want a design review or a code review?

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    Actually, both.

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    Looks good, what did you use to make the slider?

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    It's called AnyThingSlider. Got my stuff from Tutorialzine - PHP MySQL jQuery CSS Tutorials, Resources and Freebies. Loving the jquery thingy lol

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    You'll have to publish the PHP source somewhere then if you want it reviewed

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    Hi it doesn't fit horiz on x 1024x768 display and the info at the bottom has to be scrolled down to see it.

    regards

    Simon

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    'wedsite under construction

    sorry being petty


    looking good



    'blue scree of death'

    'the fist step'
    'computer take long' does not sound correct missing an s i think also itune mght need an s too

    quite a few spelling mistakes mate you might want to look at that

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    The links in the tabs at the top only link when clicking on the text, rather than the entire tab. Could be an issue I'd say.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SimpleSi View Post
    Hi it doesn't fit horiz on x 1024x768 display and the info at the bottom has to be scrolled down to see it.

    regards

    Simon
    or 1024 x600 on my netbook i had to scroll also.

    firefox

    nerd zone are you sure about the name?


    hope you take all our comments in a good way we are not ripping you to pieces.
    Last edited by round2it; 14th March 2010 at 08:44 PM.

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    Make your mind up whether you are an 'I' or a 'We' - you use both in different bits of text.

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    Hi Daveyon
    Looking good - but some of your phrasing and grammar is a bit suspect. I am happy to review it anytime if you would like, but here is a start:

    "Not having an internal IT technician can be stressful when you are dealing with technology issues. That's where Xternal IT comes in. I can manage your infrastructure and computers at reasonable rates that will delight you. I can also supply Dell products at the fraction of the prices charged by most resellers.

    In the 'home support' bit, it should be 'slowly', not slow. Over-the-phone should be hyphenated.
    In the 'business support' bit, it should be 'advice' and 'incorporate'.
    'What you need to get in place' doesnt make sense - do you mean: what systems you need to put in place your or something like that.

    As I said, I am happy to review any text so that it looks as professional as possible. I expect you still have my email address, so please send anything you would like me to look at
    Last edited by witch; 14th March 2010 at 09:52 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by witch View Post
    Hi Daveyon
    Looking good - but some of your phrasing and grammar is a bit suspect. I am happy to review it anytime if you would like, but here is a start:

    "Not having an internal IT technician can be stressful when you are dealing with technology issues. That's where Xternal IT comes in. I can manage your infrastructure and computers at reasonable rates that will delight you. I can also supply Dell products at the fraction of the prices charged by most resellers.

    In the 'home support' bit, it should be 'slowly', not slow. Over-the-phone should be hyphenated.
    In the 'business support' bit, it should be 'advice' and 'incorporate'.
    'What you need to get in place' doesnt make sense - do you mean: what systems you need to put in place your or something like that.

    As I said, I am happy to review any text so that it looks as professional as possible. I expect you still have my email address, so please send anything you would like me to look at
    Oh no... witch has her red font out....

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