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Im a noob to web development but so far Im catching on very fast. Im creating my ...
14th March 2010, 08:50 AM #1
Website Look Over
Morning Website Gurus.
Im a noob to web development but so far Im catching on very fast. Im creating my very own website, Xternal IT - External IT Support Throughout the West Midlands. Its not finished cos time is limited. Can someone have a look and tell me if its crap or it look ok-ish?
PS: validator.w3.org found alot of errors, but Ill sort that later lol.
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14th March 2010, 09:34 AM #2
Honestly? There isn't much to see. A homepage with multiple code errors and dead links.
Design wise it is ok-ish.
Perhaps post back when complete so we can give a better critique.... if Mods allow it, as I would have thought this is technically unauthorised advertising.
14th March 2010, 09:42 AM #3
Thanks for looking. I'll add more stuffs to the homepage. By the way, I'm not advertising, I hope the mods could see it that way.
Thanks again for looking. I'll get to wrk now.
14th March 2010, 12:42 PM #4
You've tagged this thread PHP, does that mean you want a design review or a code review?
14th March 2010, 12:59 PM #5
14th March 2010, 01:46 PM #6
Looks good, what did you use to make the slider?
14th March 2010, 02:13 PM #7
It's called AnyThingSlider. Got my stuff from Tutorialzine - PHP MySQL jQuery CSS Tutorials, Resources and Freebies. Loving the jquery thingy lol
14th March 2010, 09:06 PM #8
You'll have to publish the PHP source somewhere then if you want it reviewed
14th March 2010, 09:14 PM #9
Hi it doesn't fit horiz on x 1024x768 display and the info at the bottom has to be scrolled down to see it.
14th March 2010, 09:20 PM #10
'wedsite under construction
sorry being petty
'blue scree of death'
'the fist step'
'computer take long' does not sound correct missing an s i think also itune mght need an s too
quite a few spelling mistakes mate you might want to look at that
14th March 2010, 09:24 PM #11
The links in the tabs at the top only link when clicking on the text, rather than the entire tab. Could be an issue I'd say.
14th March 2010, 09:25 PM #12
or 1024 x600 on my netbook i had to scroll also.
Originally Posted by SimpleSi
nerd zone are you sure about the name?
hope you take all our comments in a good way we are not ripping you to pieces.
Last edited by round2it; 14th March 2010 at 09:44 PM.
14th March 2010, 09:54 PM #13
Make your mind up whether you are an 'I' or a 'We' - you use both in different bits of text.
14th March 2010, 10:46 PM #14
Looking good - but some of your phrasing and grammar is a bit suspect. I am happy to review it anytime if you would like, but here is a start:
"Not having an internal IT technician can be stressful when you are dealing with technology issues. That's where Xternal IT comes in. I can manage your infrastructure and computers at reasonable rates that will delight you. I can also supply Dell products at the fraction of the prices charged by most resellers.
In the 'home support' bit, it should be 'slowly', not slow. Over-the-phone should be hyphenated.
In the 'business support' bit, it should be 'advice' and 'incorporate'.
'What you need to get in place' doesnt make sense - do you mean: what systems you need to put in place your or something like that.
As I said, I am happy to review any text so that it looks as professional as possible. I expect you still have my email address, so please send anything you would like me to look at
Last edited by witch; 14th March 2010 at 10:52 PM.
14th March 2010, 11:36 PM #15
Oh no... witch has her red font out....
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