Does this look ok or complete cack?
Opinions and suggestions most welcome.
Does this look ok or complete cack?
Opinions and suggestions most welcome.
I think it looks quite good but isn't very easy to read at all. Might just be my tired eyes though!
PEO (13th September 2009)
Cheers, I'm thinking of doing a version 2..
I started to get a little bored of it and struggled for ideas
It's always the same when you have been working on something like that for so long. You need other's opinions as what started as a great idea starts to look rather bland to you after long enough!
I think it's a great idea though, just as I say, I found it slightly difficult to read and I have perfect eyesight, no problems reading anything, just a little tired at the moment!
PEO (13th September 2009)

I like it, it's a little tough to read but it's arty stuff so I'd expect it to be less than straight forward!
PEO (13th September 2009)

It's brill but what about on just a plain white background to make it easier to read?
PEO (13th September 2009)

You don't need to be able to make out every letter to know what it says, that's what art is all about. Kids will love it.
PEO (13th September 2009)

I like it, tis a little hard to read...
Department is clear enough. Im personally not sure about the m in welcome and the T in to...![]()
PEO (13th September 2009)

PEO (13th September 2009)
I'm playing around with diffrent back grounds, I was thinking dark hard wood floor with a desk lamp shining light down on the text.
I have to agree with the comments, some of the text is difficult to read, maybe I can improve with drop shadows.
the 'h' in 'the' is not quite what I was going for... Thnk I will do that again.... just been out to buy some smarties to take a photos of the diffrent colours![]()

Strange thing to say, and I don't know if this was intentional or not, but the "art" in "depARTment" is a lot lot clearer than the word Art itself!
PEO (13th September 2009)

Perhaps using those simpler letters have A r t down the left hand side in the empty space, thin horizontal line to break it to the right , and then move 'to' onto the second line so you can either see the 'easy' Art or read the more complex but quite pretty and beautiful message.
PEO (13th September 2009)
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