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Comments and Suggestions Thread, Proofreading in EduGeek Stuff; Originally Posted by CyberNerd excellent example of Godwins Law http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Godwin's_law Took your time....
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    Re: Proofreading

    Quote Originally Posted by CyberNerd
    excellent example of Godwins Law

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Godwin's_law
    Took your time.

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    Re: Proofreading

    http://www.edugeek.net/index.php?name=Content&pid=14

    Internet Audit Solutions Who Will --->Doneate<--- 10% Of Any Order If You Mention EduGeek.net When Ordering

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    Re: Proofreading

    Just spotted this on the Lancs Uni Page

    We Liked To Thank Lancaster University For Offering This Discount To Our Members
    Remove the 'd' from Liked - it reads as though you would have liked to thank them but won't

    Would be better if it read ' Edugeek would like to thank .....................'

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    Re: Proofreading

    Just spotted this on the Lancs Uni Page

    We Liked To Thank Lancaster University For Offering This Discount To Our Members
    Remove the 'd' from Liked - it reads as though you would have liked to thank them but won't

    Would be better if it read ' Edugeek would like to thank .....................'

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    Re: Proofreading

    Probably Shouldn't Be Caps Either.

    Andy

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    Re: Proofreading

    all done

    cheers

    russ

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    Re: Proofreading

    Is it just me that can still see:
    "Internet Audit Solutions Who Will Doneate 10%" ???

    Knowing the LEA it probably is just needed some closure.

    Ben

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    Re: Proofreading

    Can you check now?

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    Re: Proofreading

    That looks good now.
    But the next bit
    "to found out about IT Vision by going to http://www.itvision.net. " doesn't make any sense either.

    Ben

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